Aemielius (5 out of 10 ) The basic plot of this script is fine; genetic mutation kills off human species and crazy old professor saves the day.
The dialogue is a bit clunky but it gets the job done.
Beyond that, this script borders on stupid, particularly in regards to character names; Will Robinson; Robert Plant; Aragorn; Ma-gog; Nazgul?
To the writer, Terry Hayes. Overall its a fair story but it could use some work.
Nazgul (7 out of 10 ) Good script, the battle scenes are particularly well done. It didn't surprise me that this came from the same writer who did The Road Warrior and Mad Max in Thunderdome. Though it's clear this is a first draft; the formatting is all out of whack and there are several typos littered throughout, but not so much to make it unreadable. Could use some polish, but otherwise a very good story. Exciting read.
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